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Arucard
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Old 04-13-2004 , 22:07  
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This was one of the first flows I ever wrote. Its called Sarcastic Rhymes Its short but has some goo d punch lines:

My rhymes are like guns all they need is bullets
My words are hideous like a kid with a mullet

Yo skills are sick like a bitch wit aids
Yo style is whack like when aks spray

You make no sense , fuck that you senseless
Im like the plane that hit the pentagon, Ill leave you defenseless
Im like a cat thats gets no sleep
Straight up restless
Im like asthma leavin you and yo niggas straight up breathless

Im like books on racks stacking up shelves
You short like that keebler nigga families full of elves

My rhymes are like arrows comin straight from a bow
Yo rhymes is like static interruptin my flow.

** This was not a serious flow at all I was laughing the whole damn time lol **
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Old 04-13-2004 , 22:09  
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whats a serious one
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Old 04-13-2004 , 22:10  
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lol it was for fun I was staring at my ugly ass friends face the whole time
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Old 04-13-2004 , 22:26  
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"writing my flows"

You relize once you right down a flow that is not longer called a freestyle, that is called a song, most songs are written down, that is why there are song writers, righting down a freestyle no longer makes it a freestyle.

Freestyle = Spur of the moment Mic Spitting.

Writting something down no longer makes that spur of the moment mic spitting
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Arucard
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Old 04-13-2004 , 22:27  
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I was writing down what I thought at that pont in time. It was a spur of the moment type thing because I was saying that through paper to my boy. But yes technically you are right.
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Freecode
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Old 04-14-2004 , 00:14  
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No offence arucard but you rhyme doesnt have an "all that" flow.
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Old 04-14-2004 , 01:21  
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"Ill use your face as my shooting target
Try to move and ill take off the safety button"
tell me that aint tight? i might use it in mynext battle. Just came up wid it.
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Arucard
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Old 04-14-2004 , 06:16  
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Offense. None taken. But your rhymes are truly out of sync. And as I said that was just for fun. Onto a smore serious matter its different. And no that aint tight at all. It sounds like a run on line. No offense.
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Freecode
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Old 04-15-2004 , 01:52  
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then u must not noe how to freestyle at all.
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Arucard
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Old 04-15-2004 , 02:18  
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know* And with rhymes like that, I wouldnt freestyle at all. Freestyle about things your surrounded by. Not fake ass shit invented or popped up into your head. Freestyling isnt about shit you see on tv, its about what you know. So stick to what you know and stray away from the guns. Next thing your gonna end up speaking about is the projects and how life is there. So please dont get too involved into your flow. No offense.
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