What you've done is actually change nothing in the plugin's functionality. Tell me if i should quote in the 4th time what i said before. Or maybe you just didn't get what i've said? Is this my fault? If so, let me know and i'll try harder.
But in fact this shouldn't be approved simply because you do not realise how to perform a simple player alive check correctly. You are executing the functions on the client even without knowing the fact that the client is/isn't alive or even connected. You should note that this is not a good pratice to approve the plugins of the author who do not know something that is related to the basic scripting. You should learn the AMXX scripting basics before releasing the plugin, even if it is so simple like this one.