[nicolazo103]

Hi everyone
I was a little bored a few days ago and i tried to make this:

Description:

You use a command and a menu appears. It contains a few little funny things. You can buy or be:

PHP Code:

bpammo
A medic kit
Godmode
Noclip
Speed Boots
Change Model
A Spy
Glow! LOL
C4 Kit
Invisibility 


Command

PHP Code:

say /fun
say_team /fun 


Yes, I know, it isn´t big plugin, it´s just for fun.

Credits
BOYSplayCS, who improved and organizated the code (sorry for my english)

[BOYSplayCS]

That has to be one of the most unorganized, sloppy codes I have ever seen.

[Jon]

Not unorganized at all, but the code needs improvements. I'll get back to this.

[nicolazo103]

That has to be one of the most unorganized, sloppy codes I have ever seen.

I know, XD

Not unorganized at all, but the code needs improvements. I'll get back to this.

How can i improve it?

[BOYSplayCS]

I'll post you an improved version in a couple minutes.

[nicolazo103]

I'll post you an improved version in a couple minutes.

thanks I´ll watch it to take notes for the future.

[BOYSplayCS]

I have fixed your code, made it more readable and added the use of semicolons.

Take note, that this version actually compiles. Replace it with the one in your first post.

Also, take a look at the source code. I removed and added some things that made the plugin more efficient.

[fysiks]

Originally Posted by BOYSplayCS I [...] added the use of semicolons.

Don't confuse the poor guy. . . . You missed 3.

This is confusing (It shows up twice). If you always use braces to enclose the statement you won't go wrong.

PHP Code:

                    if (!is_user_alive(id))
                        
                    cs_reset_user_model(id);
                    set_task(5.0, "menu_fun", id); 


[Hawk552]

Originally Posted by BOYSplayCS I have fixed your code, made it more readable and added the use of semicolons. Take note, that this version actually compiles. Replace it with the one in your first post. Also, take a look at the source code. I removed and added some things that made the plugin more efficient.

... this is not much better. I would never approve either. So here's the message:

There are major errors in this that prevent it from being approved. Here are some of them:

Your code is unreadable.

This is redundant and cannot be approved. There are other plugins which do the job equally or better.

This plugin serves no real purpose or can be done using other plugins.

If you would like any information regarding possible adjustments you could make or things you could do to make this better, please feel free to post here or PM me.

Unapproved.